Interview with Lane Diamond, Author of “Forgive Me, Alex”

Lane Diamond

Lane Diamond, Author

I recently had the opportunity to interview Lane Diamond, co-founder and executive editor of Evolved Publishing, and author of Forgive Me, Alex. Read on to learn more about Diamond, his creative process, and his literary inspirations.

MS: What drew you to the suspense/thriller genre, and how would you differentiate it from mystery?

LD: Thrillers differ from mysteries in the sense that they’re not so much about whodunit, as they are about the tension and emotional strain leading up to the end. Even if the reader has a sense of what’s coming (in some cases, the author makes it clear), a good thriller will keep the reader turning the pages because she just has to see if it really happens.

Character attachment is critical to the thriller genre. As the reader, you must care deeply about one or more of the characters embroiled in the action, or the story just won’t work. Ideally, and this is just my opinion, you’ll love two or three characters, and hate/fear one—the bad guy, of course. The other critical element is pace; a thriller must move forward at a good clip. That’s not to say we should give short shrift to character development, or turn it into an action film on paper—all effects and no emotional content. However, thriller readers expect to remain in high gear for most of the book.

My early days of reading—I mean serious, voracious reading—were dominated by the likes of Stephen King, Robert Ludlum, John Le Carre and Frederick Forsyth. I hadn’t yet developed an interest in what we might call “literary finesse,” so the rapid action kept me engaged. Later on, I learned that just because a thriller moves quickly doesn’t mean it can’t be well written. Indeed, I discovered that some thriller authors were excellent technical writers, and I concluded that a “literary thriller” held some appeal for a lot of readers. I was one of those readers and that led me down my eventual writing path.

MS: Do you have a background in human psychology, either academically or personally, that informs your fiction?

LD: Well, I always wanted to be an Orthopaedic Psychiatrist… you know… a Bonehead. Actually, I took a number of psychology courses in college—just enough to be dangerous. The human mind intrigues me. It’s a wonderful, dangerous, mysterious, loving, evil, caring, disturbing machine. Good stuff; fodder for great stories.

MS: What inspires you, or drives your work?

LD: I write because I must, and because the alternative is unthinkable. The act of writing is, for me, a psychological imperative. I write of my thoughts and dreams, joy and anger, fears and aspirations. The process relaxes me. I pour out my angels and demons onto the page, and thus refresh my soul. It’s been that way since I first started writing short stories and poetry at the age of 12. It was all quite juvenile, of course, but it started a process to which I’ve clung desperately in the years since.

Yet I’d like to carry that to a higher level, and be able to make my living as a writer. All of us, if we’re lucky, will have the opportunity to work at something we love. We’ll wake up every morning ahead of the alarm clock, raring to go, thinking, “Man, I can’t wait to get to work.” This, to me, is a blissful life. It’s taken me a long time to get to this place, but it remains my primary goal.

MS: Could you tell us a bit about your creative process, from concept, to outline (if you use outlines), to words on the page?

LD: I tend to sit at my computer and stare into space, thinking of story possibilities, of characters, of settings. I then jot down notes on how I might tie those elements together, perhaps with a line or two of narrative or dialogue, just to plant the seed. Then I expand it to 2 paragraphs, then 3, then 4—until I have a couple pages of conceptual material. That might take me 30 minutes, or it might take me a year—depends on the piece.

From there, I start at page 1 and simply write freely. I let the story unfold as if it were telling me the story, rather than the other way around. I let the characters jump in where they will, and tell me what’s happening.

At some point, when it appears I may have a cohesive novel, I outline it—at least several chapters ahead—to keep me on a logical track. In the case of Forgive Me, Alex, that happened at the 30,000-word mark of a 98,000-word novel. Additionally, I then went immediately to the ending, and wrote what would become the last 4 chapters. That gave me my destination (it didn’t change much, by the way), and made it easier to stick to the path when I went back to where I’d left off with the earlier portion of the manuscript. Thus, I suppose you could say I start as a pantser, but finish as a planner. I’m a hybrid.

MS: Do you have a favourite book or author? If so, what do you love so much about it/them?

LD: Oh, this is really tough, because I love so many great works; I tend to think in terms of Top 25. Still, if someone held a gun to my head and made me choose a single book, it would have to be Harper Lee’s singular masterpiece, To Kill a Mockingbird. The characters are so real, in no small part because they were so closely based on real live people. Atticus Finch is a gem.

As to favourite authors, once again I have several, but I would place Mark Helprin at the top (A Soldier of the Great War, Memoir from Antproof Case, Winter’s Tale and lots more). I love his work for two primary reasons: extraordinary characters, and extraordinary prose. If you’ve never read Helprin’s work, I’d recommend starting with A Soldier of the Great War. I love the protagonist, Alessandro Giuliani, and I think you might, too.

Visit this link to enjoy a FREE sample of the first 5 chapters of Lane Diamond’s novel, Forgive Me, Alex.

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“Spannocchia Guest Book, 1964-1994″ in The Found Poetry Review

Spannocchia Villa, Tower, and FattoriaMight I offer a virtual escape from the grey void that is Vancouver in November? I compiled and threaded together a found poem from entries in an old guest book at Spannocchia in Tuscany this past summer. The guest book was used from 1964-1994 and contained many colourful, humourous, and engaging entries and drawings from the people who visited Spannocchia over the course of those thirty years. It gave me a little thrill to invent mental pictures of these people and the scenes that had played out in the villa and on the grounds of the Italian tenuta during these decades.

My poem was published in the Fall 2011 issue of The Found Poetry Review (with an accompanying audio recording). Check it out: Spannocchia Guest Book, 1964-1994.

Here’s to the sustainable agricultural estate that is Spannocchia. Click here to learn more about this inspiring place and the various programs they sponsor and facilitate.

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Hot Ink: Creative Writing Program for Teen Girls

I’ve been given the opportunity to facilitate a creative writing program for teen girls through the Richmond Women’s Resource Centre. It all looks very official here: Hot Ink Creative Writing for Teens.

I’m currently in the process of recruiting participants and brainstorming ideas for writing exercises, activities, and special events (bearing in mind what a wise teacher once told me: “Steal. Steal as much as you can from your colleagues.”) I plan to.

Having received a great deal of mentorship in my life, it’s encouraging to know I’m now in a position to pay it forward.

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The Art of Revision

Last year, Kevin Spenst interviewed me on the subject of revision. Specifically, the delicate art of revising poetry. Since then, he has interviewed a slew of established and emerging poets as part of a blog series called Poetic Edits. As Ray Hsu once said to me: “I’d like to think that we’re never done revising: that is, [poems] never become inert except in those snapshots we call publication.”

Here is an excerpt from my interview with Kevin on Poetic Edits:

How would you characterize the process of revising your own work? Do you have any special tricks to taking out commas, words or lines?

I like to think of the process of revision as distillation. I ask myself what a poem wants to be, what it is writing towards, and then I can identify the lines that don’t help it to get there. I often find that the first and last lines (or even the first and last stanzas) need to go. In initial drafts, I have a tendancy to “introduce” and “explain” the poem, which is really just a cue for me to understand what the poem wants.

With regards to nit-picking about words and punctuation, I try to read the piece aloud to pick up on interruptions in flow. Awkward words and lack of rhythm become apparent when a piece is read orally, so I try to treat each piece as both a written and spoken art.

Robert Lowell wrote that “Revision is inspiration.” To what extent do you think that’s true? Is it ever true to say, “Revision is hell”?

I think that both of these statements can be true, depending on where I’m at with a piece. I like to think of the word “revision” as “another vision.” If a new vision for a piece is easily inspired by the vision that came before, then revision is inspiration. If I am stuck on a piece that needs work and I can’t see where it’s going or what it wants to be, then revision is hell.

When that is the case, I usually open a blank document and start again in order to save the poem from sailing down the River Styx, so to speak.

Read the remainder of this interview here.

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New Releases from Evolved Publishing

To celebrate the launch of the riveting YA paranormal thriller/romance Forbidden Mind, by Kimberly Kinrade, Evolved Publishing is offering an extra-special deal. If you buy a copy of Forbidden Mind from any online vendor, you will get three awesome short stories for free! And these are good, folks.

Written by two of the best authors/editors at Evolved Publishing, these stories will leave you wanting more. All you have to do is email EP at Marketing@EvolvedPub.com with your purchase receipt, and they’ll send you Smashwords coupons for the three short stories.

Buy Forbidden Mind on Amazon, Smashwords, or BookieJar. (It is also available on iBooks as an eBook and Barnes & Noble in paperback.)

Look at what you get for just $3.99:

Forbidden Mind by Kimberly Kinrade

“Do not make any plans on the day you begin, as once you start, you will not be able to put it down.” – L.M. Stull

“This book was fantastic!” – P. Larsen

“Forbidden Mind is beautifully written and worth your reading time.” – BookWormSans

“Definite must read. For once you start, you simply can’t stop. 5 out of 5 stars!” – H. Badgwell

 

The Sword of Oops by D.T. Conklin

“It reminded my of a Coen Brothers film in that it is very humorous, featuring bumbling characters caught up in something far beyond their comprehension. The Sword of Oops provides good solid laughs!” – J.R. Evans

“This is a fun read … This story is something you can finish on your lunch break without issue. It’s good for a day you are in need of a laugh.” – M.J. Kaufmann

 

 

Devane’s Reality by Lane Diamond

“Lane Diamond weaves a logical thread through Devane’s Reality, until revealing an ending that, while not completely surprising, is both clever and satisfying. He offers a nice mix: funny, poignant, sad, intriguing – and I love the diary mechanism.” – Steve Z.

“This haunting short story by talented author Lane Diamond explores the fragility of the mind, and shows that there is more than one kind of loneliness. I highly recommend this well-written short.” – K. Kinrade

 

Wind Tunnel by Lane Diamond

“The story is a well-crafted character study about a doctor facing an interesting choice in his life. How he handles it and the perspective he maintains the entire time is what really makes this little gem glow!” – J.R. Evans

“I first discovered Lane Diamond through his short story Devane’s Reality. What can I say? I’m hooked on this guy. He just knows how to write. Wind Tunnel is, as a previous reviewer stated, a feel-good story. It’s character-driven, and I enjoyed each of the two primary characters. Once again, I’m happy to recommend Lane Diamond.” – Steve Z.

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My Favourite Acronyms

Vancouver in October is fabulous. It’s full of my favourite acronyms. The month kicks off with the cinematic wonders of the VIFF (Vancouver International Film Festival), during which I happily shiver in long lineups with my fellow film buffs, toting a sandwich and thermos full of tea.

Then Granville Island becomes my second home during the VIWF (Vancouver International Writers Festival), where I am usually awkward and inarticulate as I ask my favourite authors for their autographs. (When will I master the sophisticated art of schmoozing?) This year, the V125PC (Vancouver 125 Poetry Conference) will also be taking place during the VIWF. What’s a girl to do? It’ll be an exercise in artful scheduling, I tell you.

In the midst of all this, I need to perfect my zombie moves for the 5th annual TTW (Thrill the World) dance/charity event. Come October, there will be no rest for the wicked. Phew!

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Evolved Publishing

Through a serendipitous encounter on Twitter, followed by a round of emails and a long interview via Skype, I am now an Editor at Evolved Publishing. This company functions as a cooperative that brings together like-minded writers, artists, and editors to embrace the eBook market in a new way. We inhabit the space between traditional publishing houses and the problematic terrain of self-publishing in an electronic age.

If this concept speaks to you, check out the website, as well as those of my fellow team members, under “Evolved Publishing” in the sidebar.

Yours in evolution!

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Let’s converse!

Welcome! I will be posting news and updates on my writing, reviewing books, reporting on literary events in and around Vancouver, and discussing the writing process.

It’ll be fun. Really. If you be a lover of the written word, “I pray, come and crush a cup of wine.” (Oh Shakespeare, you lush.)

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